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southa big of magic intentional?:detective: With everyone distracted by the funeral, you seize the opportunity. You use a big of magic to break through your chains and unlock the cell. You are free once again.
- Suso (@Sozu, Caythori Baron)
- Akira (@Khan Kira of Caythor)
- BartTheBart (@Queen Bartholomew of Bartholoton)
mato why- Written in third person, but not in a book or note like the other times it has happened, and not in quotes. It is narration. But also tried something new to throw off people.
- Horse is capitalized. I capitalize words, at random lol capitalised stuff looks better in a text, not as boring
- Both in story time and in Bart's message, its' Sir Federick the III. Both in Bart's Text and Story Time, it is an excerpt from a book.
- Semicolon and then capital letter. I literally use semicolons all the time, check past stories smh.
- "Then, everyone got drunk and started drunkenly annoying him, because he didn't want to drink." <- This yeah this was a braindead sentence, i didn't have the mental capacity to write something better
- Ser Curtis of Caythor is mistyped. did i actually mistype it? fuck xD
- Katy has a "bloody sword", but the guard was not killed with a sword (Leila), and there's no other reason for the sword to be bloody. ever heard of a red herring?
- Semicolon used with capital again. no shit
- "someone threw up all over him. Done with all this shit, he washed himself and went to sleep" <- This i wasn't sure how i could rewrite "Done with this s***" so i just left it in, lol
- Message doesn't end with a period. did i forget a dot or did bemo just noct copy it?
And it clearly tries to frame someone else while giving an alibi for the moment of the death no shit, that's the point (edited)
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- Akira (@Khan Kira of Caythor)